Thursday, February 07, 2008
Delicious
Half eaten
along the roadside
you lie
waiting for decay
to drive by
Were you merely
too much
or not
delicious enough
©2008 Fenny
Photograph: IMAGE*AFTER
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Comments
I love this one on several levels. First, noticing the less than noticeable is something I appreciate. Second, your perspectives on what you saw are fascinating. Bravo!
Posted by: Scott | Friday, February 08, 2008
Wow, that's great!
Loved it, fenny!
Posted by: Arasu Balraj | Wednesday, February 13, 2008
I agree with the above comments. Your poem has the impact of a really good photograph, but it is your ability to see beyond the obvious that is so well done. Nice. Short and perfectly crafted.
Kat
Posted by: Poetikat | Saturday, February 16, 2008
simple and so easy to enjoy reading this
Posted by: lissa | Sunday, February 17, 2008
These words capture the 'what' and the 'why' of the scene effectively, effortlessly. A compact piece. Cheers.
Posted by: Soulless | Wednesday, February 20, 2008
Hello,
This is lovely. Love the way you're combining images and words on this website - works particularly well on this one to capture the moment.
Goenchi
Posted by: Goenchi | Tuesday, April 08, 2008
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