Saturday, March 08, 2008
Vanity
Though empty tomorrows
can hold an uncertain promise
our story had been told
We said our goodbyes
wearing warm feelings and smiles
but inside our hearts had run cold
Against all odds
I never saw you again
except for once
but as tall shadows hid me
I just sat there silently
watching you enjoy a hearty lunch
You looked so good
better than I remembered
in the warm shine of that midday sun
and I didn't want you to see
what had become of me
this slightly let-herself-go mom
Vanity-driven I wanted to look my best
whenever we would meet
and not get caught on a bad hair day
but I sure would've loved to hear your voice
and today I regret I made such an idle choice
For here in your casket you lay
and though my varnish has severely cracked
I sit here picture-perfect
on this old hardwood bench
trying so hard to remember
the rich and lovely timbre
I'll never hear again
©2008 Fenny
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Comments
What am amazing piece!! Portraying the intensity of your feelings of regret and conflict and the shame of being vain instead of present is so true.
You are a beautiful poet!!
Posted by: Scott | Saturday, March 08, 2008
Wow!
You have a real gift for cutting to the heart of the matter. Brilliant!
Kat
Posted by: Poetikat | Tuesday, March 11, 2008
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