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Sunday, May 04, 2008

The Woman In The Mirror

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if not me

but if you're me

then who am I

Must I be you

or could I be anyone

Are we both

or could we be neither

and am I no one

 

 

©2008 Fenny

 

 

Dutch Version:

Tuesday, May 27, 2008

 

De vrouw in de spiegel

 

Wie ben je

als je mij niet bent

maar als jij mij bent

wie ben ik dan

Kan ik zijn wie ik wil

of moet ik jou wel zijn

Zijn we allebei

of geen van beiden

en ben ik niemand

 

 

©2008 Fenny

 

 

On the identity prompt from Writers Island

for more takes on the prompts go to:

http://writersisland.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/prompt-link...

 

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Comments

i am ever so distressed by that woman who is in my mirror... it feels good to know i am not alone.......

Posted by: paisley | Sunday, May 04, 2008

Fenny,
The fellow I see in the mirror has no soul therefore he must not be me but a stranger in a disguise masquerading as me.
rel

Posted by: rel | Sunday, May 04, 2008

good one...

Posted by: arasubalraj | Monday, May 05, 2008

The depth of thought as we look in that mirror and try to figure out who we are really looking at ... and what that person sees.

Posted by: Scott | Wednesday, May 07, 2008

Hello, I have a poetry website and blog, and I would like to know if you would be interested in exchanging links.

I have linked to your site from:

Free Poems.

and

Poem Poem Poem

If you would like to link back, that would be great!

I have also created a blog where you can register and publish your own poems and stories. I would love to have your contributions if you are so inclined. The blog is

Your Poems Your Stories.

Posted by: Anna | Sunday, May 18, 2008

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