Tuesday, January 06, 2009

Veils Of Mist

Usually I can’t peek through

the veils of mist

that shroud your memory

but every once in a while

I catch a faint glimpse

of who you were

and not seldom

it leaves me torn

between the lie that was

and the truth that is

Unsure of what to think

or how to feel

like waking up

from a bad dream

and knowing you're safe

but still unable to shake

that feeling of unease

 

 

©2009 Fenny

 

 

Dutch Version:

Tuesday, January 06, 2009

 

Mistflarden

 

Meestal zie ik niets

door de flarden van mist

die de herinnering aan jou

aan mijn geestesoog onttrekken

maar af en toe

vang ik een vluchtige glimp op

van wie je was

en niet zelden

laat het me verscheurd achter

tussen de leugen die was

en de waarheid die is

Onzeker wat te denken

of te voelen

een beetje zoals ontwaken

uit een akelige droom

weten dat je veilig bent

maar toch niet in staat

om het gevoel van beklemming

af te schudden

 

 

©2009 Fenny

 

Comments

Well, your new year is off to a rollicking start with some brilliant poems, Fenny. I love the way you manipulate syntax - "not seldom it leaves me torn". Great. Evocative. Stirring.

Kat

Posted by: Poetikat | Tuesday, January 06, 2009

//and knowing you're safe
but still unable to shake
that feeling of unease//

that's were the depression starts...

Posted by: saravana raja | Friday, January 09, 2009

:)

Posted by: Nick | Monday, June 22, 2009

Beklemmend en intens.....

Posted by: Momo Luna | Sunday, October 18, 2009

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