Wednesday, February 18, 2009

My Little Icarus

You belong to the sky

as much as I’m earthbound

and although fate brought us together

that day you lay broken-winged

on the chilly ground

we knew the day would also come

when I’d have to let you go

and you’d follow the sun

So fly away my little Icarus

your wings have healed

and you must go on

before it’s too late

and winter spreads his frosty blanket

over bare soil fields

Fly to where family awaits

and maybe think of me

every once in a while

but never dwell

 

 

©2009 Fenny


Comments

This is sweet, but I'm not sure I understand who your Icarus is - it must be a very personal piece.

Kat

Posted by: Poetikat | Thursday, February 19, 2009

hello, fenny

nice poem. though your site is much more elaborate than mine, i think we may share a common sensibility, and maybe similar sorts of readers. i would be happy to link to your blog. When you have the time, if you're so inclined, please look at my poetry blog http://notinthenewstoday.com/
and let me know if you are interested in linking.

best,
Patrick

Posted by: pat | Friday, February 20, 2009

I enjoyed visiting your blog. I've read several of your poems and enjoyed each one. This poem, 'My Little Icarus', grabbed my heart...especially the last words, 'think of me every once in a while...but never dwell'. Words from the very heart of you, I think. Unselfishly beautiful!

Hazelmarie 'Mattie' Elliott

Posted by: Hazelmarie 'Mattie' Elliott | Wednesday, February 25, 2009

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