Tuesday, June 16, 2009
One Lonely Tear
All your pain silently wept
in one grief packed droplet
falling from the corner of your eye
unnoticed by anyone
but me
Traceless
it ran down your perfect cheek
while you quickly regained yourself
even smiled
before you began to speak
But the sorrow in that lonely tear
said so much more
©2009 Fenny
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Another beautiful poem. Your last two lines were perfect. I love the amount of emotion and description you pack into such short poems. Very fun to read.
Posted by: Ben | Tuesday, June 16, 2009
Love this
Posted by: Nick | Monday, June 22, 2009
Beautifully expressed Fenny...so sad.
Posted by: geraldine | Saturday, June 27, 2009
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