Friday, November 26, 2010
November
Traces of desolation in
the leaves rotting on the ground
the cold wind around the house
the rain falling down
Misty grey days
that haunt the soul
like beings from hell
with the emptiness
of a lover's farewell
©2010 Fenny
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this really captures the feel of november for me...i like this poem very much!
Posted by: gineke | Tuesday, November 30, 2010
Very well crafted..!!
keep Writing My Dear.. :)
Posted by: Olivia | Saturday, December 04, 2010
Greetings!
How is everything?
Are you interested in theme writing? Do have poems related to dreams, visions, or reveries?
If YES, welcome linking your poems to our potluck week 13 at Jingle
Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Even if your answer is no, you are more than welcome to link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme (dreams, visions, or reveries) and enjoy the fun of sharing and encouraging!
Our week 13 potluck is open Sunday, 8pm, American Central Time…We will be thrilled to see you in…
Let me know if you have questions
xoxox
Posted by: Olivia | Saturday, December 04, 2010
I like the complete thought of this, and your imagery is so very alive. I am in awe!
Kellie
Posted by: Kellie | Monday, December 06, 2010
Rotting leaves and discarded love plus it's a powerfully written short poem.
Posted by: Michael Yost | Sunday, December 12, 2010
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